Sunday, June 6, 2010

'Without Vision These Shows Perished'

By Kellie McDonald
For the Real Critics Blog

Let me paint a picture for you that was this year’s Redlands Shakespeare Festival. Picture a large stage that is used for three shows -- Hamlet, Romeo and Juliet, and A Midsummer’s Night Dream. Above the stage it says “Without Vision a People Perish” unfortunately for this festival it should say “Without vision these shows perished.” At least that would have been a fair warning to the audiences for what they were about to witness.
Now how do I introduce my thoughts on Hamlet? Maybe I should jump right in and get to the major issue that was the cause for all the other problems. Hamlet is an intense tragedy that takes the director, who takes the actors, and, in turn, they take the audience on an emotional journey. The artistic director of the festival, Steven Sabel, foolishly took on more than he could handle. Sabel not only directed the show (And A Midsummer’s Night Dream... we'll get to that later), he also did the fight choreography, and cast himself as Hamlet. There are very few cases where a performance is decent, let alone enjoyable, when the director is the main character in the show. There are even fewer cases where a forty-year-old man playing Hamlet could be conceived as a good idea. Unfortunately this production of Hamlet does not fall into either one of those cases. I think it would be a great injustice to even start to comment on the actors for they weren’t even given a chance to have direction for their own personal performances. So the fact that they couldn’t find their lights, they had unmotivated blocking, they broke their own reality rules which they had created, was to no fault of their own because they were without direction. Some of the supporting characters acted as if they were in a happy musical verses a classic tragedy, and they all around seemed to have very little understanding of the text, but again, this should not be held against them.
Luckily the entire cast didn't seem as lost as their lead man. It was very clear that Tom Newman, who played Polonius, knew his role and the story. His energy came alive on stage and he brought appropriate humor that the audience understood.
Sabel delivered his lines over dramatically and milked every speech for every second he could. Shatner could have said those speeches faster and clearer than Sabel did. The only tragedy about this production was simply that it was done. The audience was giggling throughout the entire show. Sadly the most dramatic part of the production was when Horatio put his hood on right before the black out at the end of the show.
In the center of the stage they placed a huge throne. There are two parts of the show where anyone who knows the story of Hamlet expected the throne to be used; during the dumb show, because that is where a King would sit to watch the play, and at the end for the final dramatic fight. For the dumb show the King sat on the floor with everyone else. That was so frustrating to watch because a King would not sit on the floor let alone with all the people of his court. My frustration was then turned into great confusion as Hamlet tried to, what seemed to be, rape Ophelia in front of everyone while no one did a thing. Instead of the conversation being an aside between the two characters everyone sat there and watched with slight concern on their faces. At the end of the play when the dramatic fight happens I thought to myself, “Now they must have something planned for the throne, seeing how it is center stage and this is the end.” Sadly the King sat in it for a total of 30 seconds then stood up again. Why would they have something center stage that was never used? Maybe it had some deep meaning? Or maybe it was simply there just to take up space.
While watching all three shows on the stage with the added thrust I came to the conclusion that the stage was large enough for what they were trying to accomplish and the thrust was not necessary. Not only did they have enough space already but they were unable to have front lights for the thrust so all of the actors faces were covered in shadows. Seems pretty silly to me if you’re trying to bring the action closer to the audience, yet, by doing so, you only make it harder to see their faces.
The second show I saw in the festival was Romeo and Juliet, directed by Ron Milts. Going into this show I felt confident that it could not be nearly be as awful as Hamlet because it had a different director. It was not as bad as Hamlet, but it was not good by any means. The acting over all was a step up from the previous show. Again some of the actors acted as if they were in an upbeat musical. There were several females who, yes, created character voices but with no help to keep their voices from making the audience’s ears bleed. Romeo and Juliet are one of the most famous tragic lovers in literature. Unfortunately the audience could not help but chuckle through their misery.
If I was to ask anyone (whether they knew the show or not) what is the first thing you think of when you hear the title of the play, Romeo and Juliet? They would answer “Oh Romeo, Romeo. Where for art thou Romeo?” The balcony scene is probably the most thought of scene in the play. On the stage were a total of four different platforms and where does Milts decide to have the balcony scene? On the end of the thrust, that is where. If you have several options that all could work very easily for the balcony scene, why on earth would you choose somewhere else?
Through the entire show they used the thrust as the balcony, which at least they were consistent about using the space as only one location. Oh wait, excuse me, it was the balcony through the whole show until the very end where without any notice the space became Juliet’s tomb. At first it seemed that her father just laid her “dead” body outside her room on her balcony. As an audience member for a few seconds, before I caught on that they were in her tomb, I found it believable that her father would just throw her dead body out her window, because earlier in the show he hit her and the actor created the feeling that he was an unbearable father. By having Juliet’s tomb on the thrust it meant the actress had to lay there close to the audience through the other scenes while she waited for the final scene to come. This took me out of the play completely and I just felt bad for the actress who had to lay there. This performance over all was pretty forgettable.
And last, but not least, A Midsummer’s Night Dream. This show had the audience laughing through the entire show. Luckily for the actors this show is supposed to be a comedy. For anyone who actually knows the show we were disappointed, but most of the unknowing audience seemed to be entertained (and that’s what really matters, right?). Again directed by Sabel this show fell short in many areas. The blocking consisted mostly of the actors either doing very poorly choreographed slapstick comedy or standing in a straight line talking to one another. The lovers were not in love with each other; they only were concerned with sex and the last time I checked love consisted of more than just lusting after another person. The actor who played Puck was more of a goof-ball instead of being mischievous so it was difficult to understand his motivation.
The slapstick comedy was not necessary through the whole show. The story alone is funny enough. To cover up the lack of knowledge of the script Sabel had the actors jumping over backwards to get laughs instead of just telling the story. It was obvious that no one payed attention to the text when Titania asked the fairies to sing her to sleep and instead of singing they just danced. If he was going to have them dance Sabel could have changed the text or cut the line entirely (it’s Shakespeare, and royalty free, so no one would blame, or notice, if you make such changes).
I can honestly say that the actors did do a great job of keeping up the energy and pace in this show. Also it was great seeing a couple scene changes, they showed the different worlds by using pillars for the court scenes and for the fantasy forest scenes they used the giant tree that was placed center stage. While in the forest, when some magic would happen, there was a laser sound effect that did not seem to ever be timed correctly with the actor’s moments. The sound effect was distracting and not necessary because the actors movements should have been enough to tell the audience magic was happening. On the counter side of that, while there was no dialogue on stage and magic was happening the background music was perfect and done very well.
If you don't mind two and a half hours of actors who sound like yapping dogs and giggling 12-year-olds, and sloppy slapstick comedy then this show was for you.
The Redlands Shakespeare Festival fell short all around in almost every aspect of theatre. As an honest reviewer I will acknowledge that the audience did seem to enjoy the shows and the majority of them stuck around through the entirety of the performances. When it comes down to it, yes, all the shows could have been MUCH better, but their audiences were entertained and that may be all that matters.

The Redlands Shakespeare Festival is an annual festival that produces three shows in May each year. Visit www.redlandsshakespearefestival.com for details.

11 comments:

  1. Why do people keep doing Shakespeare?!

    Try learning to produce a basic production well and move on from there.

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  2. Wonderful. In learning how to do a "basic production", we eke out history that has been a part of theatre for centuries, in exchange for lackluster language and unimaginative values. Bravo.

    People keep doing Shakespeare because it resonates. The themes, the plots, the characters-- they all strike at the hearts of actors and audience in profound ways. What "basic production" would do that? And what defines "basic", other than "here's an actor, here are some lights, here are some lines-- Have at it"?

    If only theatre could be so summarily categorized. Then we could be as easily dismissed as a high school basketball game like all the other worthless endeavors that hold no cultural significance.

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  3. I believe that no community theatre company should do Shakespeare unless you make the actors and the director take a Shakespeare acting course (1 month minimum) and take another month learning iambic pentameter.

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  4. After seeing two of the three productions this year (I missed out on Midsummer) I have only this to say: if I wanted to watch overacted, schlocky, slapstick and overly sexed Shakespeare, I would pay the admission price and go to the Renaissance Faire(s). That's where I expect and (dare I say) enjoy this take on performing the Bard.

    Unfortunately, I am getting the impression that many companies / directors in the area are actually taking these production styles as THE way to perform Shakespeare's plays. This is a great disservice to the members of the audience who, if given the chance, might actually enjoy a Shakespeare piece that was thought out, well conceived, studiously directed and honestly acted.

    I'll keep going to see the Classics performed. One of these times I won't laugh at the tragedy or cry at the comedy . . .

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  5. And in this local area, are there "Shakespeare acting courses"? And by iambic pentameter, are you suggesting that all Shakespeare can be hammered into iambs? Five feet? What about when they're off/uneven? What about when the iambs change? And will you suggest that there's no difference between "To be or not to be" to "O he hath misused me past the endurance of a block"?

    Fortunately for me, I've already had this education. It's nothing that isn't taught at an English Literature course, or for anyone willing to read for themselves rather than have some strictly didactic lecture forced upon them. For most, acting out Shakespeare will never happen unless they ACT OUT SHAKESPEARE, and that kind of experience isn't going to happen unless someone steps up to teach an acting course that isn't offered in any local area institution of education.

    Your desire to put this section of theatre into a box is appalling. Would you recommend that everyone master French before delving into Moliere? German before Brecht? Greek before the Clouds?

    You should only be so lucky that people TRY to tackle Shakespeare. It's better than not doing anything at all.

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  6. Shakespeare strikes neither the hearts of actors or audience when it is produced and performed by dilettantes, who butcher the language, verse and theatrical principles until tragedies are comical, and comedies tragic. Only the erudite, well-trained players among us can bring any meaning to their dialogue and thus do the Bard justice. I'd rather see reader's theatre productions with competent speakers sitting on stools than the usual zombies walking the stage speaking as if they just learned English phonetically.

    Shakespeare is for black belts, and the IE is for the most part a white belt world.

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  7. Allow me to point out that tradition has it Shakespeare didn't go to college, held no advanced degree, and that Theatre Arts have only been taught seriously at the college level for a hundred or so years. Theatre is the domain of the common man. Period. And, in my humble opinion, the truly "great escape" for them.

    Shakespeare was written for ... See Morepeople with little or no education, even by our standards, yet it was vastly popular. These plays were not written simply to be recited, but to be steeped in the life-blood of performance. Do companies miss the mark? You bet your ass! Name the last time there was a "hit" play by the Bard on Broadway (that wasn't set to music). But I've seen just as many bad versions of musicals around here as I have Shakespeare. Perhaps they need to stop doing musicals, too?

    I would argue that it is the audience that needs an education - one that can only be brought by the we who are passionate and daring enough to get up on that stage and ask the questions, do the actions and provoke the thoughts (oh, did I mention stimulate the economy, too?). If your "Community Theatre" isn't doing all of those things, then it's simply "Club Narcissus".

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  8. Wow...as someone that enjoys reading the reviews on this blog I would have to say this was much less of review than a simple hate fest. If one does not simply like a show, it's more than enough to say I thought the show was lacking for these reasons. Instead this reviewer feels the need to insult the actors, the set, the festival and the people behind the shows by basically insinuating that they are all idiots.

    Then my favorite quote. The final nail in the coffin that pretty much tells me this reviewer not only hates these shows but hate the audience for going to the shows.

    "The Redlands Shakespeare Festival fell short all around in almost every aspect of theatre. As an honest reviewer I will acknowledge that the audience did seem to enjoy the shows and the majority of them stuck around through the entirety of the performances. When it comes down to it, yes, all the shows could have been MUCH better, but their audiences were entertained and that may be all that matters."

    I think it matters very much that the AUDIENCE liked the show. Because if an AUDIENCE likes a show and you hated the show that might mean that you are in the minority and not the majority and maybe, just maybe, your opinion is not in line with the average theatre attendee.

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  9. To the anonymous poster above: Agreed. Critics should serve as advocates. Berating an audience for enjoying something that the critic disliked is something akin to that elitism that really ought not exist in a collaborative communion like theatre.

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  10. I personally believe the rare beast, a theatrical critic, has a sacred duty to express truthfully their opinion of the value, truth, righteousness, beauty or technique in regard to theatrical production.

    To me, it's not a question of agreeing the masses, tearing down that which deserves praise or praising that which should be torn down, but to toughen our perspective with regard to our own work. The Theatre is a game of mental toughness and artistic courage.

    In this region, we desperately need an audience to be informed of what theatrical quality is and a challenge to the purveyors and practitioners of our chosen art form.

    In my theatre-going time, I have seen many a group who, suffering from complacency, got a good slap in the face from some honest feedback and turned their group around. I've also seen great work unfairly slammed by critics to only go on to be praised by audiences at the box office.

    I believe it's not up to the critic to advocate anything other than quality. If you see quality, praise it. If quality absent (regardless of size or enthusiasm of the audience), lambaste it with all of your power to compel.

    As for the artist, respond to your critics with dignity. I'll give you some wise quotes from a guy that had a real artist's perspective -

    “Whatever I do is done out of sheer joy; I drop my fruits like a ripe tree. What the general reader or the critic makes of them is not my concern.” --Henry Miller, author

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  11. Some of the critiques in the review were very thought out and constructive, others were harsh, but she is a critic not a elected official who needs to express the voice of the people. I thought the two shows that I saw were okay, but I did find myself incredibly bored at points in both. Blocking was not very well done in Mid Summer, but the balcony scene in Romeo and Juliet was very innovative and fresh. Theatre is about thinking outside the box and adapting it to the context of the time period it is being performed in. It was the festival's most successful season ever and for people who are dedicating themselves to perform for the public for FREE, one should be a bit more grateful to the fine people who put the shows together.

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